Wednesday, May 13, 2015

Ask SD Tracy Harper #47

Ask SD Tracy Harper #47
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Q:  SD, what is the difference in writing in first and second person?

A: Basically what you are looking at are pronouns that replace nouns as the subject of a sentence. As you already know a person using their own name while they speak is speaking in the third person. Normally, this person thinks much of themselves or someone who has trouble thinking at all. Sorry, but I had to get that one off my chest. Let’s first understand that there are two pronouns that exist for writing in each person and they are singular and plural. When writing in the first person the two that are the easiest to understand are the words like “I, Me (singular)” and “We, Us (plural)”. As for writing in the second-person, it is writing in the point of view of the reader or character who is reading. Words like “You, Your, and Yours (are both singular and plural).” What I believe (my fought if I misunderstood) is the use of a character’s name more than once, even if it is in conjunction with a first person pronoun. For example; Raymond and I were ready to enter the hall, but he suddenly put his face in a nearby trash can to place the lunch he had just eaten.  When he rose, I could tell he was ready. Now if we didn’t use the pronouns it would read (also grammatically correct). Raymond and I were ready to enter the hall, but Raymond suddenly put Raymond’ face in a nearby trash can to place the lunch Raymond had just eaten.  When he rose, I could tell Raymond was ready. This is also a nice third person example. I’m far from a grammar expert, but I hope this helps you get started. SD

Q:  SD, who do you think makes a better villain, men or women?

A: Both and neither. Did you actually think there was going to be a simple answer to that one? Men are great villains if you clarify their reason for doing bad things. Their motivation can be for money, power, the love of a woman, or revenge. Simple motivations are the best when it comes to male villains. As far as it goes for the female villains being bad, it is the skies the limit and beyond imagination. Oh, but their villainy is subtle and manful for not only themselves but for everyone around. Whatever their motivations, it isn’t simply solved by shooting someone in the head, or blowing up some building. When female villains do something they are, first and foremost, out to prove a point. Not only that, when they do what they do, not everyone sees them as the villain and in some why understands why they had flipped out. One of the greatest attributes of a female villain is they are rarely caused harm to the man who had done them wrong, but to everyone and anyone who was involved or knew what they were up to and didn’t warn them. In their eyes, they are just as guilty no matter if they male, female, and especially close friends.  Female villains are more classy with their unbridled hatred and mindless destruction, where male villains just like to blow crap up. I hope this helps. SD

Q:  SD, Can you really complete one story and yet start up another one at the same time without the ending being a cliffhanger?

A: Yes. It is called the riding off into the sunset effect. The promise of an ending of a long hard fought challenge with the victors finally having a moment to rest. Love triangles are now broken and all that is left is the happy ending. Take this, for instance. Let’s say that you diffuse the bomb and had saved your love interest from the other person who was prepared to kill them because they couldn’t have them. Yes, the old if I can have you then no one will. Now that all the clues are solved, no loose ends to tie off, and the misguided fool is behind bars (or better still dead). You profess your love and it is replicated. All that is left is to wave at all those who had assisted you to bring to the end, one extremely trying and complicated time in your life. This is where it is and isn’t a cliff hanger. An old lady walks up to the grave of the third wheel and drops some flowers on their grave and walks away shaking their head sadly and says I knew where I went wrong. Or, the maximum security jail cell’s door opens and a man walked in with a smile on his face. He is very large and scary and wearing a prisoner's uniform. He has a wild and hungry look in his eyes when he asked; why did he have to kill his baby he had only seen once? Is the story ended, yes and no. is there a cliff hanger? Ah, yes and no. I hope this helps. SD



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